Posted by alesta on April 22, 2006, at 13:56:24
In reply to Re: i beg your pardon!! only kiddeen..., posted by Phillipa on April 22, 2006, at 13:37:24
> I agree with Alesta . Could I add some corrective criticism from my perspective only. You sound rather desperate. I would leave out the word cheap, you sentence what does this guy know, and simply state I am a social worker don't explain your hours . And just talk about you in general. What do you think? Love Phillipa
i agree phillipa. absolutely leave out that stuff. the rest of his ad is just gorgeous though. jay..fine tune this and you are bound to strike gold. yes, take out anything that smacks of 'neediness'. definitely.:) there's a subconscious penchant to run from that, in all humans, i think...:)
amy
p.s. i hope i didn't convey that i think the personality theorists are correct in their nearly opposite personality matchings for relationships. i always find that i do better w/ ppl who are more similar, although that is not my final assessment by any means..what i'm saying is, i really have no idea...;)
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