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Any comments / Warning..poetry

Posted by Phil on January 14, 2005, at 16:01:01

BLUE AND GREEN

He longed to be an artist
With liquid words flowing free
He longed to be transparent
And oh, so easy to read

Purple shades cover blue and green
Blue and green, below the earth
Below the earth, the darkness dwells
The cast bronze sound of sullen bells

The purple haze, enveloping fog
He longed to see for days too long
And he knew it there-because he could see
The diamond blue light, covering me.

Re: Any comments / Warning..poetry - Phil

Posted by Kath on July 13, 2005, at 9:29:28

In reply to Any comments / Warning..poetry, posted by Phil on January 14, 2005, at 16:01:01

Hi Phil - I haven't checked in here for I-don't-know-how-long, but I was just skimming through previous posts.

I always feel edgy commenting on poetry, because what if I totally misinterpret what the poet means... but I DO want to at least say something. I think it's an amazing poem & you have a wonderful gift with words, Phil. My whole family - we're "word people"...we LOVE WORDS.
I don't fully understand your poem, but I find it incredibly moving anyway!

Thank you for posting your poem. It means a lot to me - I think it means that a person feels pretty darned safe emotionally here to do that & that makes ME feel nice about 'here'.

I'd be interested in being able to read some of your other poems if you felt like posting them. I'm going to try to 'check in' here more frequently.

:-) Kath

> BLUE AND GREEN
>
> He longed to be an artist
> With liquid words flowing free
> He longed to be transparent
> And oh, so easy to read
>
> Purple shades cover blue and green
> Blue and green, below the earth
> Below the earth, the darkness dwells
> The cast bronze sound of sullen bells
>
> The purple haze, enveloping fog
> He longed to see for days too long
> And he knew it there-because he could see
> The diamond blue light, covering me.
>
>

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